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Meg's Solutions for Writer's Block
If your child is having trouble writing, feel free to choose one or some of these ideas to help him/her get some words and/or stories out!

  • See if your work environment needs more silence or music.
  • Draw and/or look at pictures to start stimulating some thoughts and ideas.
  • Look around for inspiration (daydream).
  • Read something.
  • Move your body.
  • Ask a peer, a teacher, or a parent for help.
  • Take a break. Stop writing for a while and then return.
 

Meg's Revision Tips
When your child has finished writing a story, feel free to use these suggestions to help make his/her piece better.

  • Identify the parts you want to revise.
  • Add details and images.
  • Delete any unnecessary language (boring words, vague words, etc.)
  • How are your verbs? Are they strong enough? Examine them. Are they “standard” and/or too ordinary? Do you use the same verb repeatedly? (A thesaurus can become your best friend. Don’t forget!) Sometimes, a great verb can make an image sharper instead of a list of adjectives.
  • Look at your lead. Is it good enough? Is it a good hook? Is your opening line (or two) inviting, provocative, and engaging enough to get the reader to keep going?
  • Look at your ending. Is it good enough? Is it complete? Is your subject or “issue” resolved, with the reader not left hanging?
  • Open up your sentences. Are ALL of your words and sentences visual, vivid, and unusual enough so that the reader doesn’t get bored or confused?
  • How is your title? Are you inviting the reader in? Are you telling too much so that the reader doesn’t need to keep going?
  • Often times, revision is actually WRITING MORE, NOT CUTTING! Think about your piece. Have you said enough?
  • All good writers revise. Don’t give up! Keep going to make your piece the best it can be!